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Author: ugrnm <ultrageranium@bleu255.com>
Date: Sat Feb 1 10:18:14 +0100
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-This in turn leads to more robust online democracy and also massive value extraction.
+This in turn is supposed to lead to more robust online democracy but it also lead to massive value extraction.
-In response to the practices of commercial social media the response from floss communities was to create an alternative
+In response to the practices of commercial social media the response from floss communities was to create alternatives
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-by 2017 through the mastodon project more diverse communities joined the fediverse, including queer and gaming communities
+in 2017 through the new fediverse software mastodon, more diverse communities joined the network
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+including queer and gaming communities and people traditionally underrepresented in floss
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-as these communities helped build mastodon they advocated options to selectively shut out parts of the network that where harmful for them through server blocks or defederation
+as these communities helped build mastodon and other fediverse software they advocated options to selectively shut out parts of the network that where harmful for them through server blocks or defederation
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-Especially after snowden revelations in 2013. Many F/LOSS projects tried address issues of surveillance at the network level, either by governments or large corporations.
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+Especially after snowden revelations in 2013. Many F/LOSS projects tried address issues of surveillance by governments or large corporations at the network level
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-This model has been eroded throughout the decades to the situation where usership has became limited to questions of customisation and feedback on product development.
+Later through the decades this model changed to the situation where the user became a customer and usership became limited to questions of customisation and feedback on product development.
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-And even further with the model of usership as a source of revenue for a third party.
+This model eroded even further with the model of usership as a source of revenue for a third party.
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For us this presentation, the paper and the workshops we led this week, are also a means to share the current state of our research. There's more to come, we're planning to work on a publication with Lídia Pereira and Liaizon Wakest and hopefully we will be able to involve more members of the Fediverse in this project.
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+background-image: url(invite.png)
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-For now, if you're interested in knowing more, we invite you to see for yourself how the Fediverse looks like.
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+For now, if you're interested in knowing more, we invite you to see for yourself what the Fediverse looks like from the inside.
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+The image you see on screen is an invitation to post.lurk.org, our artist run fediverse instance
